Wally-Waffles's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Reaserching Movement, TFW]

I lesson for many...I guess

If you REALLY want to make a good study of motion by tracing live-action, I would recommend that you put more detail in: Trace the EXACT outline of your figure, including fingers, ears, chin, etc.

Basking-Shark responds:

will do thiis was just basic background reaserch reli, thnx anyway

[Gladys and the Moon]

I kinda liked it.

What I liked:
*Background art. Finger painting? Nice.
*"Those tickets expired four months ago."
*The music was good.

What wasn't so great:
*When the scenes got dark, it was hard to see the good background artwork, and just the crappy bits of artwork stood out.
*The dreamy (or nightmarish?) border didn't extend all they into the top-right corner.
*Some speech text was obscured by the border.
*When people are talking, please use some variation in lip animation instead of blinking the mouths on-and-off. (Recording dialog and syncing to that would be a big plus.)

[Lord of the Apartment 1]

Ha!

Great parody! And the "Jeremy Fisher" reference was hilarious.

Phelouser responds:

Hahaha awesome! I'm glad that was found funny by other people as well!
thanks

[The Mizi & Molly Show (3)]

Beschissen

Eine Katze, die aus Scheisse entstand? Und noch eine, die durch einen Furtz geboren wurde? Das lässt Scheisse gut aussehen!

[Don't Stop John]

Entertaining

Excellent lip sync. Now, it would be even better if you animated the guy's eyes, too.

But, who is that guy supposed to be? Your college professor? A famous physicist? A brief introduction in the Author's Comments would be nice.

[Star Wars Transitions]

Kurosawa Akira

The Japanese filmmaker Kurosawa Akira used a LOT of transitions in his old black & white films, and George Lucas drew a lot of inspiration from those films.

[Collab Part]

School lockers suck

That reminds me of how hard it was to open my locker when I was in highschool. I carried a pair of plyers in my pocket to get the bloody thing open!

Flea-Productions3 responds:

You gave me a anecdote instead of a review. Great.

[Love- A Story]

Very good

Good work. Here are some suggestions for improvement:

The lines of text that appeared on the blank backgrounds could have used some color or shading. It seemed especially out of place when the dark night sky alternated with the blank white screen of text.

At the part that's narrated "I went to a far away land...", a few lines of text stick out of the side of the screen.

[Undestructable]

Interesting

It would have been better either in color or else with shaded backgrounds. (i.e., the lack of background detail in many scenes was actually disctracting.)

GuitarBrdArounO responds:

alright man.....no backround= distracting

[Dream A Little Dream coll]

Nice.

"Love"ly moon, too. But the English all went by too fast to read.