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Aha, much better

Oops, I didn't know this was here when I reviewed the preview version. (Maybe you should take down that preview so that people will stop mistaking it for the "current" version.)

Overall much improved! The voice-overs are a nice touch. "Well, if you'd bring me a blue berry pie from Mama's kitchen..." =)

Suggestions:
* It might be a good idea to position the speech boxes according to the speaker's proximity to the edge of the screen. i.e., ensure the text is never cut off by the edge of the screen. Maybe even go with the traditional RPG method of freezing player action and centering the text box on the screen.
* Requiring user input to advance through dialog would be great. Some text goes by too quickly while others don't fast enough. It all depends on how sleepy or alert the user is...

If this is the preview, when's the postview due?

A few points: (mostly concerning "is this a bug or is my browser just crap")
* The guy sitting on top of the kitchen says "I hope you like the gift" when you give him the bottle, but I can't find any new item laying around or in my inventory.
* Is the ladder in the hole supposed to be usable? I can't get Joe to go down it.
* I can't get Joe to shoot his gun. He simply raises the gun and points.
* Assuming the opening (sidewalk area) scene is the extent of the demo, there ought to be some end goal that declares "Thanks for trying the demo..."
* You probably ought to post a FAQ somewheres.
* Joe's leg animation is kinda cool...if he were moving backwards, it would look like he were moonwalking.

I like to hide an extra joke as an Easter Egg in my flash movies.

Wally Waffles @Wally-Waffles

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